Chuunin Exam: Question 2

My answer/scenario for question 2 of the exam...

(Question 2 :: Oh no! Your team is under attack! One of your teammates is injured and the enemy is rushing towards them to finish them off! You and your other teammate are otherwise engaged in battle with two other enemies. What do you do?)

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Kaminari looked around the room at all the students, now focused on their exam before them. She could sense the nerves and feelings of anxiety radiating from all the genin. She glanced over at Nadeshiko, who looked perfectly calm, while staring at the paper intently. Kaminari then peeked over at Yoko, who was writing awfully fast with a smile on her face. Kaminari now looked down at her own blank, paper. She laughed ever so slightly. Although, it seemed as if the whole room were nervous and unprepared for this test, she knew that there was atleast one squad that would ace it.
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Team 2's usually perfect formation had fallen apart....all three of the girls were now separated just enough for them all to become vulnerable. Nadeshiko was lying on the ground; her badly wounded leg prohibited her from moving. However, neither Yoko nor Kaminari had noticed immediately, because they were engaged in their own fights. Nadeshiko's sticky sweets were slowing down her opponent, but would not last for long. Her enemy approached her, reaching for his katana. On the other side of the field, Kaminari noticed the absence of her teammates and very quickly scanned the area. Yoko was close, fighting a fast, fire ninjutsu user. She spun around, now looking for Nadeshiko. A terrible feeling surged through her, as she saw her teammate undefended and helpless. "Yoko!" she yelled. For the first time in awhile, Yoko looked away from her enemy. She took in the situation, but didnt say a word. Kaminari could tell that Yoko was more than worried. Kami tried to run to Nadeshiko's aid, but her opponent was a strong, wind ninjutsu user, who was intent on keeping Kaminari as far away as possible. Kaminari knew there was no way she could get past her enemy's long range attacks. However, she knew that Yoko was certainly fast enough. At that moment Kaminari had drawn in her enemy exactly where she wanted her. Now her enemy no longer stood between her and Yoko. Kaminari dashed back to where Yoko was, her enemy not expecting such a move. In a second, Kami had the fire user backed up against a tree. Without hesitation, Yoko drove her Katana through him, pinning him to the tree. "Yoko, go now!" Kaminari instructed. As she turned back around to face the wind user. Without a second thought, Yoko sprinted the distance, to where Nadeshiko was. The man walking towards Nadeshiko, had only one focus. Nadeshiko. He only noticed Yoko when it was too late. Yoko landed a powerful kick, right in the center of the man's chest. He let out a loud breath, but didnt move. His body swayed a little, until his knees gave out and he fell forward.............
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If you read all of that crap... then I applaud you.

Anyways, I apologize to Nadeshiko... for making you go through such pain! I feel so terrible everytime I look at that part of the drawing ....(next time it will be Kaminari.)

Nadeshiko

Yoko

Kami (unfortunately I didnt have time to draw her...)